Please review my website & sales pages

[moneymagnets]

Hi everyone,

I haven't been on here for while but I need some constructive criticism since I've got a website and 2 sales pages and I'm not selling anything.

I'm not getting a lot of traffic to my site and that may be one of the issues but I want to make sure that I'm not missing something with the website itself.

There is one thing that says test on it since I'm trying to move from 1Shoppingcart to Virtuemart since Virtuemart with an add on affiliate system is much cheaper and seems to do the same thing.

Website: Money-Magnets.Net (http://www.money-magnets.net)

Sales page for Successful Personal Finance:
Money Magnets Successful Personal Finance (http://www.mmspersonalfinance.com/)

Sales page for Path to Success book:
The Path To Success (http://www.thepathtosuccessbook.com/)

Thanks for your help - it is appreciated. I have asked for feedback from friends but they're friends who know me so I'm not sure if they are being polite :)

Regards,
Karen

[daggydoo]

I had a look at it and two sales pages for me it would be the copy and way it is layout.

These are two areas in which it can improve outside of that I look at the keywords you have pick.

Most are what on the line between been a seed keyword and a buying keyword.

To explain the word accountant what is it am I looking for is a job,business, or a course now if i type small business accountant that makes it easy for say more than like a business or a course.

So buying for accountant would more like
Business Accounting Services - Brisbane, Australia

Notice that this is even target to location as wel

[abd]

Every time I see websites setup like the links below I think it's a spam website

Money Magnets Successful Personal Finance (http://www.mmspersonalfinance.com/)

The Path To Success (http://www.thepathtosuccessbook.com/)

There is plenty of good content there, but I just think the layout kills it a little

However, I like this one Money-Magnets.Net (http://www.money-magnets.net/)