Please Review My Site!

[Shubie]

Hi,

We have recently updated our website Yahoo! Online Store Design, RTML Programming & SEO Solutions On Your Budget (http://www.website4retail.com) and need all critics to make it better. Please feel free to send your ideas. We are a Yahoo! Store Design company.

Thanks!

[The Y-man]

It's really confusing and I don't understand what it is trying to promote.
Is it aimed at some particular segment of the population or the general public? :(

The Y-man

[Brendan]

I agree with Y-Man.. what are you selling? Your title says SEO and RTML programming, but the main site says Yahoo! store design..

Can you explain a bit further who this is aimed at?

[geraldbell]

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[Hugh Thyer]

Hi Shubie

I think the point that people are making here is that its not clear from your website what your business is. Usually you've only got a few seconds to get your point across, and give people a reason to stay on your site.

When I looked at your site I saw a whole lot of things that looked like ads and links to other 'things', although I didnt know what they were. If I wanted to stay, I couldnt see anything directing me where to go, like what do you want me to read, or click on, or what action you wanted me to take.

I write a weekly copywriting/marketing blog and actually wrote on this a couple of months ago. You might find it useful.

http://salescomefirst.wordpress.com/2008/10/27/why-the-first-3-seconds-can-make-you-or-break-you/

All the best

Hugh